英语写作课程
Week1
常见的基本句型:
1、简单句:主+谓+(宾+宾补)
2、并列句:简单句,+并列连词,+简单句。常用的并列连词有for、and、nor、but等
3、复合句:复合句由一个独立分句和一个或一个以上的从句构成(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句)
4、并列复合句:并列复合句由两个独立分句及一个或一个以上的从句构成
Week2
如何将文章词汇变得高级:
1、名词化
2、非谓语 -ed -ing
3、前缀和后缀表达
4、熟练的使用连接词
5、复合词的使用:take-off
Week3
文章中存在的句式问题:
1、缺少成分:sentences fragments
2、过多简单句:choppy sentences
3、符号错误(, . ;),独立句子和非独立句子之间:Run-on sentences and comma splices
4、串联句问题,句子过长:stringy sentences
Week4
写文章的基本结构:
Week5
使用定语从句连接两个简单句:
1、Fans quickly lose interest in a sports team. The team loses game after game.
Fans quickly lose interest in a sports team that loses game after game.
2、A manufacturer can offer lower prices. Its costs are lower because of mass production.
A manufacturer whose costs are lower can offer lower prices because of mass production.
3、McDonald’s has restaurants all around the globe. Most people recognize its golden arches.
McDonald’s, whose golden arches most people recognize, has restaurants all around the globe.
4、Puerto Rico has three political parties, one of them favors Puerto Rico’s becoming a state.
Puerto Rico has three political parties, one of which favors Puerto Rico’s becoming a state.
5、There was an anxiety in places. People feared losing their jobs in some place.
There was an anxiety in places where People feared losing their jobs.
Week6
八种状语从句(其中对比状语从句包含两种):
1、时间:before、after
2、地点:where
3、Distance、Frequency、Manner:as….as
4、原因:since、as(because、Thanks to)
5、结果:so….that、such….that
6、目的:so that、in order that
7、对比:whereas/while | Although、even though
8、条件:if/unless、Provided that、Given that
Week7
名词性从句:
1、 that clauses (reported/subjunctive)
2、if/weather clauses
3、question clauses(where,when,how等充当名词)
Honest principle
1、100%:It is centain/true that + 从句
2、60%-70%:It is possible/likely/impossible/unlikely/less possible that + 从句
3、30%:It is said/reported that + 从句
It is, at times/sometimes , significant that + 从句
分词结构:(用于省略句)
1、-ing:正在进行、主动、描述性质
2、-ed:过去完成、被动、产生结果
Week8
Three forms of Participial Phrase Phrase
1、General Form -ing Phrases
2、General Form -ed Phrases
3、Perfect Form Participial Phrases
随堂测验和习题讲解
PS:上课回答问题脸红,被老师点到了……我好难呀
Week9
That指前,This指后;Those指前,These指后
1、……; that is ……
2、An additional factor is that ……
3、…… , which ……
4、…… in addition to ……
Week10
说明性图表写作:
1、Introduction:
1⃣️改写题目:改动词(ex:show->display/demonstrate)、改词性(ex:use->used to)、近义词(ex:添加词water->fresh water)、连接词(ex:so->therefore)、句式修改(ex:omitted)、主语(ex:omitted)
2⃣️总趋势(optional):In general/Generally/overall 总体趋势,except for/apart from + ….
2、Body
1⃣️描述「上升/下降」:There was a marked increase in the production of computers and it dropped slightly over the next three months.|The production of computers increased shapely, followed a slight drop over the next three months.(先动后名,先名后动,句子合并)
2⃣️修饰:…..
3⃣️数据:from 5 to 7 …
4⃣️时间:(from/to/in/over/since/until/before/after)
5⃣️主语变化:The sales of computers -> Computer sales
3、Analyze
1⃣️:极值(最高、低)->差值最大
2⃣️:对比和比较级
3⃣️:数据分类(Group Data)
4、Summary(optional)

Week15
250词的作文写作:
Intro. 1、改写题目 2、观点 3、preview/scope
Body. 1、A1 2、A2 3、A3 字数差不多
1、A1 2、Although(反对的,少量文字) 3、But(反驳的,大量文字)
Conclusion. 1、Summary 2、R/S
CheckList:
词「1、名词多 2、活用分词 3、AWL 4、lead-in 5、近义词(尽量词不重复,活用变换) 6、连接词 7、情态动词(至少10个)」;
句式「1、简单句 2、复合句 3、并列句 4、并列复合句{TP;for example, SS} 5、Reduced Structure 6、被动句 7、客观事实句」;
时态「1、一般过去时 2、一般现在时 3、现在完成时 4、将来时」
PS:今天上课被老师叫到回答问题,又脸红,然后老师说穿黑衣服的这个男生不要被叫到了就脸红,要大胆的讲出来~~~ 这算不算社会性死亡啊T^T